The Cold of Chicago and Blackberry Jam (EDIT)
The windy city my playground.A kid with the keys to the cash register,jackin people for a buck. Slippin through the North end undetectedto roll a Jake or a Mick and bring it backto Bester's tavern. To...
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Thanks, Tim. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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your welcome Jan. You know, your still my favorite critic so if there is anything I need to change or fix let me know. That's goes for anything I post at your site not just this. I value your...
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Dear Tim,I know you had something very special to say, but all I can say is, I wonder if it should be in story form, as poetic prose rather than prosaic poetry.The windy city was my playground. A kid...
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Tim, Annie mentioned the punctuation before I got back to you on this one. I see you have changed the ending as well. I like both OK, I'll put my suggested punctuation changes in ( ) This is just my...
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Tim, Annie mentioned the punctuation before I got back to you on this one. I see you have changed the ending as well. I like both OK, I'll put my suggested punctuation changes in ( ) This is just my...
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Hey, with or without the puctuation, I really loved the story, poem, whatever it was. Great stuff.
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